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大学英语四级写作指导一

2021-10-01

湛江雅托英语培训中心大学英语四级写作指导【一】

 

写作要素:How to best handle the relationship between doctors and paitients

 

Mutual Understanding Is Most Important

 

首段

1、开门见山,引出话题:医患关系负面新闻居多

Whe we talk about the relationship between doctors and paitientswhat comes into my mind is generally negative news.

what comes into+名词(进入......):引导名词性从句做主语;mind脑海】

2、表明观点:互相理解可以是医生与患者和谐相处

HoweverI believe there is a way for doctors and patients to get along harmoniously—that is mutual understanding.

HoweverI believe +从句...(然而,我相信......);There is a way for sb to do sth某人是可以做某事;get along harmoniously和谐相处;破折号:—that is...(那就是靠......)】

 

第二段

层次分明:On the one hand.......  On the other hand......

On the one handpatients are helpless and worried when they go to hospital.

be helpless无助的;be worrried忧虑的;be helpless and worriedhelp的形容词helpnessworry形容词worriedbe+形容词作表语;】

So doctors attitude or response is critically important for them and their family.

critically important至关重要;be+形容词作表语;critical关键的/至关的adj.--critically关键/至关地adv.;副词修饰形容词、副词或动词;family家人】

On the other handdoctors have to face so many patients every day that they even have no time to take a rest.

so+形容词+名词+that+从句...(如此......,以至于......);从句的主语代替前面主语;从句的宾语代替前面的宾语;have no time to do sth没时间做某事;take a rest休息;face面对】

Such a high intensity of work could drive a man crazy.

such+a+形容词+名词(这种......);high intensity of work高强度的工作;drive a man crazy把人逼疯;drive sb crazy把某人逼疯】

Thusif they can stand in each others shoesmost problems could be solved.

stand in each others shoes站在对方的立场上思考问题;stand in my shoes站在我立场上】

Otherwisea doctors brief conclusion about the condition of patients might be regarded as cold blood and result on conflict.

Otherwise...(否则,......);brief conclusion简短结论brief conclusion about...(对......的简短结论);the condition of.........的情况);the condition of patients病情;might可能{推测}be regarded as...(被认为......);cold blood冷血;result in...(导致......)】

 

结尾段

Nowadaysmuch efforts has been made to ease the tension of doctor-patient relationship.

much efforts has been made to do sth已经做出很多努力来做某事;ease缓和、减轻v.doctor-patient医患adj.the tension of.........的矛盾)】

But I think the most effective one is mutual understanding and trust.

one{代词}方法;the most effective way最有效的方式;mutual互相的adj.understanding理解n.trust信任n.

 

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